Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Totally Worth It

This is from Creative Copy Challenge. The object is to use ten words and build a cohesive story. The ten words are bold. Original Post

A Disclaimer: I was trying something different with this one.

As a glacier to the valley, you formed my soul and being.
My love for you was forever carved on the stone tablet of eternity.

But you’re just an illusion.
An imposter who broke through the shield that protects my heart.

A rancid pile of excrement.
That seeks innocence to drag it into the cesspool of your life.

I’ll give you half my paycheck,
it’s totally worth it.

Better a womanizer
than a coke head.


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